Hi there. I tried listening to the chapter but I found the voice very hard to follow. It sounds like you are using sound morphing software on it. It is a cool effect but you may want to dial that back a bit so that the story flows a little better. Keep plugging along though!
Hi Kevin, thanks for the feedback, my first try at something like this, yes I am going to do this again, I have the first 4 chapters written, yes it sort of worked but needs to be clearer, good feedback.
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Hi there. I tried listening to the chapter but I found the voice very hard to follow. It sounds like you are using sound morphing software on it. It is a cool effect but you may want to dial that back a bit so that the story flows a little better. Keep plugging along though!
Hi Kevin, thanks for the feedback, my first try at something like this, yes I am going to do this again, I have the first 4 chapters written, yes it sort of worked but needs to be clearer, good feedback.